Remember, I am New to This Writing Stuff…
As I was going through my first draft, I had to address grammar and proper punctuation. It’s been awhile since high school English and, even then, I often just mimicked what I saw in the books I read. This works for the most part. Pick up a book and put your quotations and commas in the same place you see there. For now, that is good enough but I do look forward to hiring someone to double check things for me. Oh, and check out www.grammar-monster.com.